Wednesday, December 28, 2005

but without

a walk was taken on a winter's day
icy silence and drippy nose

fencepost shrouded by hordes of snowflakes
bare trees and biting breeze

seeming desolation hides life and green
drift and icicle by wind made mad

i left no tracks

3 Comments:

Blogger An Urban Femme said...

You just described desolate winter in the best way.

9:08 AM  
Blogger newwavegurly said...

I actually miss being able to take walks like that... but perhaps I can take the same type of solitary walks in a different way here — on the beach where my footprints can be washed away.

7:01 PM  
Blogger .Michael Simon said...

I like how your poetry is short but sweet. such a vivid picture of winter, I love it.

1:58 PM  

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